Saturday, October 24, 2015

link to draft of rhetorical analysis

https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1A5vaxifM9wwcw_AREdb8dogNkYADU3KF34nJlsfn2kA/edit?usp=sharing
An area of concern for me is the organization of paragraph 4. As far as additional outside the class feedback go, I plan to have my family members go over.

I have also posted what I thought was helpful information on Lekha's draft (its a comment on the blog, since the draft was in view only) and Alaina's draft, which is also a comment on the post, because the document was view only.

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